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Unit 2, Lesson 2: The Synthesis of Fiction & Nonfiction in Found Poetry

This lesson follows an introduction to the unit through discussion of the novel Journey to Topaz. Students will now explore connections between the historical fiction account of Yuki’s family in Topaz and the primary source documents they research and/or diary entries of third grade students in the Topaz camp from the nonfictional primary source, The Story of a Japanese-American Internment Camp Based on a Classroom Diary, by Michael O. Tunnell and George W. Chilcoat.  After reading and discussion of the materials in teams, students will create found poetry to convey their own opinion of what it meant to be in the camps.

Materials & Resources Needed

Standards Addressed

  • Common Core Reading, Writing, and Language Standards

    Reading

    LITERATURE AND INFORMATIVE TEXT STANDARDS

    • Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the impact of a specific word choice on meaning and tone.
    • Compare and contrast texts in different forms or genres (e.g., stories and poems; historical novels and fantasy stories) in terms of their approaches to similar themes and topics.
    • Analyze a particular point of view or cultural experience reflected in a work of literature from outside the United States, drawing on a wide reading of world literature.

    Writing

    TEXT TYPES

    • Use precise words and phrases, relevant descriptive details, and sensory language to convey experiences and events.

    VOCABULARY ACQUISITION/USE

    • Demonstrate understanding of figurative language, word relationships, and nuances in word meanings.
     

Essential Questions / Issues

  • What is justice?
  • Is civil disobedience ever justified? Explain.
  • In what ways do people react to race and differences between one another?
  • How can poetry incite empathy?
  • How does poetry express ideas differently than prose?

Objectives

Students will participate in learning activities (reading, discussion, and writing) synthesizing fictional and nonfictional reading sources to create their own “found” poetry to convey a personal point of view of the Japanese-American experience from any point of view (Yuki’s, the public, etc.)

*Assessment

This objective will be assessed through teacher observation and a rubric for the student-created poetry.

*Quality Criteria for assessment:

  • Use of language arts standards for: Writing, revision, and editing for the appropriate grade level.
  • Clear evidence in the poetry of critical thinking, synthesis of ideas, and purposefully applied point of view.
RUBRIC
Criteria Absolutely! Almost! Not Yet!
Use of specific language to convey point of view and theme      
Use of figurative language and  poetic devices (sensory, analogy, metaphor, repetition, onomatopoeia, rhyme, verse, emotional impact, etc.)      
Use of newly acquired academic vocabulary      
Use of revision for specific word choice and content      
Use of   appropriate language conventions (Capitalization, grammar,punctuation in the context of poetry)      
Poetry uses critical thinking, synthesis of ideas, and point of view      

Learning Activities

HOOK (5 MINUTES)

  1. Have students read the poem The Road Not Taken by Robert Frost and discuss what they think it means. The following steps may provide more scaffolding. (You can use any poem that involves a decision and choice, but poetryfoundation.org has the poem and a reading of the poem for students who may need that accommodation.)

DISCOVERING POWER WORDS(15 MINUTES)

  1. Students can highlight “power” words that stand out to them as important to the meaning of the poem and then discuss it (e.g. diverge). In your “power” words, do you see examples of onomatopoeia (on-uh-mat-uhpeeuh) in the power words you have chosen? This is a noun like “cuckoo, meow, honk, or boom” – imitation of a sound.
  2. You can provide them with questions of constructive inquiry. What do you think the road is? Could the road symbolize something? Is this an analogy, or a metaphor? Does the poem rhyme? Have you ever made a difficult choice that affected your future? Are all experiences good? Which path is best?
  3. Come together whole group and discuss the power of poetry to convey a deep message.  Ask: What is different about poetry rather than prose? Do you as a reader react in a different way? (Many answers may include a reference to the reader feeling a part of the poem and able to “interpret” and put his/her own emotions into the poem.)
  4. You may choose to go deeper with this inquiry by asking students to find a poem showing emotion and bring it in to share with the  group.

NONFICTIONAL REFLECTIONS (20 MINUTES)

  1. Put students in reading pairs and give each team a diary entry copied from the book, The Story of a Japanese-American Internment Camp Based on a Classroom Diary or you can use other nonfictional sources of experiences of Japanese-Americans during the camp occupations. Students will take Handout 1: Nonfictional Reflections (PDF) with them to complete together after reading their entry.  It is recommended to give different entries and sources to each pair for a more diverse and powerful whole group discussion later.  Give each pair time to complete their thoughts and jot them down on paper.
  1. Then have each student in the pair jot down a list of “Power” words or “important” words or phrases that really moved her/him in a list they will use later.
  1. Come together in a whole class discussion (a circle of chairs or a new and unusual seating arrangement is recommended to add a level of novelty for students. Facing everyone in a circle adds to the power of each person’s input.
  1. Have team’s share out; you may wish to have students record responses in charts to look for patterns.
  1. Lead the discussion into a synthesis of experiences of fictional Yuki and her family with the children from the actual camp of Topaz. How do those experiences relate?

FOUND POETRY (20–30 MINUTES)

  1. Introduce the task to be completed individually:
  • Handout 2 (PDF)
    (Found Poetry assignment with Rubric, use rubric to introduce expectations)
  • Let students know they can use their list of “Power” words or phrases they “found” in various sources along with any words from Journey to Topaz, our class discussion charts, and their OWN words to create a poem about the Japanese Internment Camp Experience.

Samples of Student Work: Found Poems

Fury of America
by Summer

Tic, tic, tic, the bombs go,
Bombs made for a special place.
Tic, tic, the bombs go off,
Setting ablaze Pearl Harbor.

Maybe we took that too far,
To put citizens in prison –like camps.
Tic, tic tic, the bombs went off,
In our heads, on the ground.

Windstorms, no heat,
The pitter-patter of feet.
Running for cover,
In their stalls for a home.

War is ablaze, the fiery eyes of hatred,
When it ended,
Tic tic, the bombs no more,
To let out and be free.

No jobs, no money,
For anew chance of happiness,
We’ve lost the madness.
For now they are released.

In the Topaz Dust
by Brenna

We acted without thinking
And shattered their trust
Because of their heritage
We locked them up in the Topaz dust.

American citizens they were
American citizens they are.
There is no excuse for our behavior
There is no excuse by far.

Their homes were sold
Their pets lost
The belongings they thought fondly of
Were given away for no cost.

I hope we’ve learned our lesson
They are loyal to this day
The Japanese-Americans wanted only peace
But did we give it?
No, we did not.

 

CLOSURE (10 MINUTES)

  1. Collect and share some poems. Reflect on the essential questions for this lesson.
  • What is justice?
  • Is civil disobedience ever justified? Explain.
  • In what ways do people react to race and differences between one another?
  • How can poetry incite empathy?
  • How does poetry express ideas differently than prose?